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Wow, what fun! This really made me sweat, took a total of 10 hours to color... c'mon, bear with me, I'm learning.

This is my first time coloring in a long time. I've applied all I have learned by reading this --> [link] and hanging out at :iconbakanekonei:'s livestream.

Feel free to comment and critique, but I ask that you leave the critique section to the professionals I've asked to review my work.

Hit download for full-res, original pencils here --> [link]

WitchBlade is property of Top Cow Productions Ltd.

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:iconbakanekonei:
okay so, i can't say i've seen tons of your work but i love this piece!!

the color harmonies are all warm but it works.

into the critique..

so there are really only a few major things here, the rest would be nitpicking and when you're starting a new coloring method there are no places for nitpicks. first thing i notice is that the darker part of her witchblade is well, quite dark and almost looks like stone and with shapes and textures and i wonder why you did that. i believe all of her witchblade should be shiny and jaggy.

secondly, the colors on her skintones of her various body parts dont seem to match up with eachother very well, mainly her arm on our right, and her legs. those are the most different although they seem to all be different to varying degrees.

this leads into my next point to touch on, your light source. right now your eye is drawn more to her hand than her face, but it's obviously brightest at the top and most of your lighting should probably come from top down. there are a few glows on her hair and lowered arm, but from what i can see the rest of her is unaffected by that lighting and it seems to have more of a 45 degree top left lightsource.

well, thats it :)
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:iconericalannelson:
Good stuff, dude!

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Damn thats not someone you want to wake up next to. :lmao:

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:iconaentheartist:
Lol, like I said on Livestream the other night, "Depends on what your into." ;)

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:iconfranticpen:
thats freakin awesome looking.. great work. :ninjabattle:
:iconbralow:
Fucking amazing man! i wish it was possible to stream you coloring this.
:iconaentheartist:
Thanks! It'll be possible as soon as Livestream releases Procaster for Mac, which I hope will be soon because I'll be coloring another piece, and I have a great mic so it'll be fun to rap with u guys :D

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I looks good :D

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:icondeadlenz:
she looks kinda fit in a piss her off an she gona rip ure spine out ure ass kinda way
:iconmax-cccp:
cool

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